Yeah aight... ehm well, these are the lyrics for my bands first song "Dead but Alive". recently finished them, and we are going to perform the song for the first time tomorrow (thursday) evening. Might be offensive to christans, but i dont assume that there are any on this board
Feel free to comment or throw in some constructive critisism (constructive means something i actually can use to something, and not like "this is shit" or whatever you want to say... but i'm sure you know

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Here we go:
Dead but alive
Just - Go and fucking die
You know, god is a lie?
This word that we are in
Your soul is filled with sins
I’m dead, but yet alive
You’re in the freakshows stride
A cry for freedom from a cage
You’re trapped inside the Christians maze
But this is not the end
Your people can’t defend
Those lame and weird beliefs
Go fuck you fucking cult!
Underground
Six feet low
Tears will run
Fear will grow
It’s a call
Upon Iblis
Down the wall
Your deathwhish Your spirit’s has left this world
It has gone into the cold
Sold to the Wanderer
Your corpse is walking of
This is the real story
Your sacred hall of glory
Shall burn under my feet
And lay your corpse to bleed
I’ll piss in your fucking cradle
The words of the satanic bible
I will rise from my spattered grave
And you shalt be my slave!
Underground
Six feet low
Tears will run
Fear will grow
It’s a call
Upon Iblis
Down the wall
Your deathwhish And thats it :-)